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Monday 24 March 2014

Monday Quick Writes

                            Imagine you build a awesome treehouse.

My tree house would be made out of hard wood and it would have 3 rooms and 1 room that leads you outside. When you see the tree house it has a swing for you to swing on. After when you step into it the inside has colored wood and the color is purple. There is  couch that  you could rest on it. There would be a hall way and there would be 4 doors. In the first room the room color would be yellow. The first room would be a music room. There would be a piano,ukulele,recorder and there would be 2 pairs of headphones. In the second room there would be a bed and there would be a button that says roof top. If you press the button there would be a glass so at night you could look at the stars at night. In the 3rd room you would have a art room. The walls would be covered with art. When the guests come they could go to the art room and they can do some art. You walk in the 4th room and it leads you outside to a big slide and the the slide takes you to a huge trampoline. When you want to get of the trampoline there would be a other slide that has lots of curls and it would make you dizzy. The slide would take you to the front door of you house.

 In the tree house I would play some music, go to the slide then bounce on the trampoline. I would go in the second room and rest on the bed.

3 comments:

  1. I really like your ideas Zahra. Especially the glass to look at the stars at night. Your sentences are a mixture of simple and complex and you use capital letters and fullstops correctly. Keep up the good work.

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  2. Very creative Zahra. A variety of different ideas.

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