Orientation Writing

This week for writing, we learnt the orientation in stories. The orientation includes your characters, your setting and starts a little bit of your problem. We then had to DRAFT one of the orientation with a partner, I worked with Nazella. I learnt about the four ways you could start/hook your story in, action, setting, sound or dialogue. 

Quick Write

This is my quick write that we had to do this week in writing. We used DRAFT to fix our writing and I colour coded DRAFT to know what was deleted, rearranged, added, fixed and talked. I highlighted the words that needed to be Drafted.    

DRAFT - Stretching Sentences

This is my Stretched sentences and I worked collaborative with Harry. We used the 5 w's to make our sentence stretch and make it more interesting. Our LI: Use DRAFT to check our sentences.